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[Remember, remember...]

Good work

I like this a lot, but a few things I have to critique are:
The lettering. It's some odd rendering and kind of pixely at the edges, and it doesn't match the rest of the piece. It just seems kind of tacked on.
and
The right hand (His left hand). His thumb would be over his fingers, not under them. Just a minor detail really, but I am a picky guy when it comes to drawings of hands grabbing things.

I DO like the pose though, and the colorings not bad either..

Th3Reaper responds:

Thanx, all kind of critique is kindly accepted.

[Lady Killer]

I love your work!!!

It all has a neat style, it seems almost like construction paper - I'm sure you've heard that before, but it's really cool.
I'm looking forward to see the animation this is advertising.

I like the color scheme too, because it seems like either one could be the inverse, instead of one obvious inverse to the other.

One critique I have of it, and I think it might be my computer, but it seems a little blurry on the text, I don't know.

Anyways, I like this!

[:Fishing Through Air:]

Really like this!!!

Cool font, cool colors, cool linework, cool everything!
This is very well done.
Don't really have any criticisms for it..

[GoH: Robot]

Great linework!

I like your linework, the highlights on the metal, and the weird abdomen thing a lot.
HOWEVER, the boobs, even for boobs, they just seem a little too big..
Especially for a robot.
That's my only criticism really, and since it's a woman robot, maybe some sort of cable/wire hair?

[My Wonderfully Horrible Life]

This looks almost exactly like Invader Zim.

I wonder where someone got their influences from :P
Good pic though, well made.

ArtificialFlava responds:

Influenced by Jhonen's work yeah, can't deny that...but ZIM's gone...something has to take it's place and that's (MWHL). :)

Thanks, it was fun making it...

[OBEY-Bot]

I really like this

It looks put together rather well.
By the way, you said you got a headache cutting this out, did you use scissors?
Just go to Rite-aid (I dont know if those exist where you are) or just like a little drug store and pick up an xacto knife in the art aisle, they help a ton and they only cost like 5 bucks or so.

Kuoke responds:

I used both actually. Just the nooks and crannies annoy the shit out of me cause I have a severe case of butter-fingery-ness.

[Slash]

I'm liking the guitar.

The guitar is really well done, and also I like the hair.
One thing that bugs me, is that the background is just kinda a little too scribbly, and maybe you could (if you want to back and work on it) square up the pecs? They seem kind of man-boobish and not as muscular as it seemed you were trying to make them.

[Furnace-bot Concept]

I think this is well done!

One thing that bugs me, however, is the placement of the right hand (viewer's perspective) and the right foot.
It seems like maybe the hand should be in front? I don't know.
Also, the hands are all perspectived, but the feet are just straight flat.
On the other end, I'm liking your linework, and the coloring of the eyes.

TemplarOfBacon responds:

When drawing this I kept flash and sidescroller games like alien hominid among others in mind, so I decided to just forget about focusing on perspective for the sake of carefree style.

I easily recognized the the feet/arm placement so not fixing them was on purpose.

If that's not enough for you, just pretend he's standing faced to the viewer, but his head is facing left...er *his* right :P

Thanks anyways though :)

[Coloriztic]

What program do you use for this?

The lining is neat, and I can't seem to find a good line tool. Is this flash?
A bit too simple for my liking, but it's ok.

Rawnern responds:

It's flash.
I know it's very simple, but I got bored, and just had to make something.